Jumbo Kepu, my name is Cia. I am a Summer Learning Journey blogger who will be working with Ako Hiko bloggers at May Road School over the summer holidays.
Wow, what a wonderful piece of writing I feel like I could see a soldier who was looking out at the enemy on a battlefield. It was really descriptive and made me feel a little scared for him. I hope you write more poems Kepu, because they are so well thought out and written, awesome stuff!
I noticed you have registered for the Summer Learning Journey but haven’t posted anything just yet, here’s how you can get started:
Copy and paste the URL below into the address bar of your browser, then click the on the ‘Week One; In The Beginning (1800 - 1870) link: https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities
Remember, in order to earn full points and a chance to win prizes for the activities you finish, make sure you think carefully about your responses and answer ALL the questions. See you soon!
Well done Kepu! Congratulations on publishing your first blog post.
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ReplyDeleteI like how you made the background look good to the poem that you did and also Congratulations for your first blog post as well.
By Vaisioa
Thank you Mrs Moore.
ReplyDeleteJumbo Kepu,
ReplyDeletemy name is Cia. I am a Summer Learning Journey blogger who will be working with Ako Hiko bloggers at May Road School over the summer holidays.
Wow, what a wonderful piece of writing I feel like I could see a soldier who was looking out at the enemy on a battlefield. It was really descriptive and made me feel a little scared for him. I hope you write more poems Kepu, because they are so well thought out and written, awesome stuff!
I noticed you have registered for the Summer Learning Journey but haven’t posted anything just yet, here’s how you can get started:
Copy and paste the URL below into the address bar of your browser, then click the on the ‘Week One; In The Beginning (1800 - 1870) link:
https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities
Remember, in order to earn full points and a chance to win prizes for the activities you finish, make sure you think carefully about your responses and answer ALL the questions. See you soon!
Toe feiloa’i fo’i (‘See you again’ in Samoan),
Cia.